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PostSubject: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Thu Jul 14, 2011 9:03 pm

I don't know where to place this, so please move this topic if it is out of place.

A story I have begun to write because I'm simply bored. Please state your opinion on it. If you want I can continue this series. Nova means New Era in Latin.

You can check out the chapters and different stuff related to this here.

Duel 1:
 
Duel 2:
 
If you find any mistakes or something confusing, please let me know.


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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Thu Jul 14, 2011 11:09 pm

Pretty good so far.
I didn't see any mistakes on my first read through.

And I don't think that this belongs in the General Chat. But like you, I don't know were it would go. Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Fri Jul 15, 2011 8:58 pm

Ah Fanfic, I believe...Yeah, I went to the Suggestion place to make a section for posts like these... and haha Duel 1 I like that XD
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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:13 am

I posted a new one. I hope you guy like this duel as much as my fantasies ran ammoc on this one. Fur Balls FTW!
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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Thu Aug 04, 2011 11:12 am

interesting so far..i like it...keep up the good work...lol...but can u explain more detailed about the spell "far behind" effects? and about the "kuribabylon", is he draw it again on his second turn after summoned it once?or is it returned to hand?or maybe special summoned from the graveyard? i still dunno about the "far behind" and kurybabylon effects...lol

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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Thu Aug 04, 2011 11:32 am

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interesting so far..i like it...keep up the good work...lol...but can u explain more detailed about the spell "far behind" effects? and about the "kuribabylon", is he draw it again on his second turn after summoned it once?or is it returned to hand?or maybe special summoned from the graveyard? i still dunno about the "far behind" and kurybabylon effects...lol

Kuribabylon's effect is on the Yu-Gi-Oh! Wiki here: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Kuribabylon

Also all of the other Kuriboh monsters, except for Kuriben, are on the wiki.

I also write down all of the cards Yuuki uses, here is the Far Behind effect:

Far Behind
Normal Spell
(Activate this when you have taken effect damage from one card this turn. Summon as many monsters from your deck with the total ATK combined as the same amount of effect damage you took.)

BTW, all of the Greek Gods have 0 ATK and DEF. Sorry for not mentioning it.
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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Thu Aug 04, 2011 11:46 am

thx...lol...btw is there any opponent that will use any syncro or exceed system??

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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Thu Aug 04, 2011 1:01 pm

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thx...lol...btw is there any opponent that will use any syncro or exceed system??

There will be Ritual, Fusion, Synchro and Exceeds, or else it would not be Yu-Gi-Oh!, correct? Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Thu Aug 04, 2011 3:11 pm

Bump, posted Duel 3. Yes, I will soon post Duel 4 within a week or so. So waddaya think?
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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Thu Aug 04, 2011 7:07 pm

Wow Shocked

Good job btw^^
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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Thu Aug 04, 2011 8:03 pm

These are really good
keep making more, im enjoying reading it Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Sat Aug 06, 2011 2:12 pm

Wow...very cool. Read duel 3.
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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Sun Aug 07, 2011 11:29 pm

Skevengal wrote:
Wow...very cool. Read duel 3.

Already did. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Sun Aug 07, 2011 11:50 pm

I really like these, keep em up, i think im gonna go research a kuriboh deck now ;D if only a lvl 12 existed D:
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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Mon Aug 08, 2011 11:45 am

duel 3 is interesting...lol

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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Mon Aug 08, 2011 1:36 pm

There all interesting. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Mon Aug 08, 2011 2:17 pm

Bump! Duel 4 is up, enjoy.
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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Mon Aug 08, 2011 2:35 pm

*Reading Duel 4*

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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Tue Aug 09, 2011 3:42 pm

*Reading Duel 4*

This is good keep it up^^

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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Wed Aug 10, 2011 10:49 am

in duel4...how can yuuki draw 2 tuners? in the first turn..she didnt draw any lv 4 or lower monsters...and before her last turn, she already discarded all monster card in the deck and graveyard....am i missed something?

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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Wed Aug 10, 2011 11:00 am

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in duel4...how can yuuki draw 2 tuners? in the first turn..she didnt draw any lv 4 or lower monsters...and before her last turn, she already discarded all monster card in the deck and graveyard....am i missed something?

Yuuki: Start with 6 cards, set two = 4 cards left.
Turn 2: draws a card = 5 cards in hand, Summon Tyr = 4 cards in hand. Book of Eclipse = 3 cards left. The Legendary Hidden Message = 2 cards left
Double Summon = one card left. Then the last card is Eternal.

I see the giant flaw right there already. Yuuki from the start should not even have more than 1 card in her hand durning her 3rd turn. I think I need to re-write this my eight time now X_X

I will fix it soon, around 60 minutes or so. Thanks for pointing that one out.

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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Wed Aug 10, 2011 11:45 am

Fixed, also I have changed the ending, so the duel is worth reading again. You might be surpried here Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Wed Aug 10, 2011 12:51 pm

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Fixed, also I have changed the ending, so the duel is worth reading again. You might be surpried here Very Happy

nicely done...but i see another flaw...how can yuuki draw book of eclipse, hidden message and double summon at the same turn? yuuki first turn: she got 6 cards after draw, 3pcs lv8 monsters, 1pcs lv10 monsters, 1spell (scapegoat) and 1trap(DNA). she set 2 cards (spell and trap) and turn end. in her second turn, she draw 1 card and summom tyr, which card that she draw? book of eclipse? hidden message? or double summon? i think she cant have those three card in the same turn right? or maybe i missed something?

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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Wed Aug 10, 2011 1:06 pm

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kavasiki wrote:
Fixed, also I have changed the ending, so the duel is worth reading again. You might be surpried here Very Happy

nicely done...but i see another flaw...how can yuuki draw book of eclipse, hidden message and double summon at the same turn? yuuki first turn: she got 6 cards after draw, 3pcs lv8 monsters, 1pcs lv10 monsters, 1spell (scapegoat) and 1trap(DNA). she set 2 cards (spell and trap) and turn end. in her second turn, she draw 1 card and summom tyr, which card that she draw? book of eclipse? hidden message? or double summon? i think she cant have those three card in the same turn right? or maybe i missed something?

In my origial file I had made that change, seems like I missed that part when I copy&paste it... Sorry... (I don't even know how I was able to do that as well...) Fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Nova   Wed Aug 10, 2011 1:39 pm

kavasiki wrote:
ultimate0 wrote:
in duel4...how can yuuki draw 2 tuners? in the first turn..she didnt draw any lv 4 or lower monsters...and before her last turn, she already discarded all monster card in the deck and graveyard....am i missed something?

Yuuki: Start with 6 cards, set two = 4 cards left.
Turn 2: draws a card = 5 cards in hand, Summon Tyr = 4 cards in hand. Book of Eclipse = 3 cards left. The Legendary Hidden Message = 2 cards left
Double Summon = one card left. Then the last card is Eternal.

I see the giant flaw right there already. Yuuki from the start should not even have more than 1 card in her hand durning her 3rd turn. I think I need to re-write this my eight time now X_X

I will fix it soon, around 60 minutes or so. Thanks for pointing that one out.


Haha it's alright. I'm sure that illustrating a duel is harder than it seems. (:

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